I've recently begun writing on Medium. Could someone please assist me by providing guidance on what elements I should incorporate into my work?

Link: https://medium.com/@xkavrepalanchok/a-journey-of-ambition-and-resilience-xkavres-struggle-to-fulfill-his-dreams-1603f75e2636

xkavre,

@Bennedict

I'm endeavoring to share my side of the story, my brother.

You are not sharing. You are "whining" like that old broken violin may be. Get a grip, do something worthwhile with your life. Going abroad is not the "only" thing in life.

You've got good command over English, why don't you go teach some underprivileged kids in a village? Hehehehehehe… lmao

I see no humor in what I said above. Instead of ranting on and on about visa rejection with that immaculate English xkabhre seems to have, he can put it to good use and move on, dear.

साझा पिकदानी हो , कसैले अहम , कसैले बाउ बाजेले दिमाग ठिक होस् वा बेठिक खियाए , कसैका बाउ बाजेले झोडा फाडेर कमाए उनका सन्तान आफुलाई धनीमानी को ढोल ठटाउछन , कोहि आफ्ना कमजोरी लाई पर्दाले छेकेर आफैलाई भुलभुलैयामा राखन साझा मा कोरी बस्छन |
गालि गलौज र नामकाड्ने काम नगरी लेख , रोक टोक गर्नु जरुरि छैन सायद यो नै उन्कालागी उपचार को माध्यम हो ?